The 2nd piano (the higher pitched one that comes in) could be a bit quieter, and some of the instruments are off time.
Still, the transitions work for the most part, you did what you set out to do, and the song has a nice wintery feel to it.
I don't think its possible for some of the instruments to be off time since they are all programmed, unless you meant just the guitar
You have a lot of interesting parts here, but they come in and out too suddenly, and that doesn't make them work together.
It gets better toward the end a bit, but if you want this to work, keep it gradual. Like at 2:12, what you have immedately drops out, save for the drum beat, but you should leave more in there to smooth the transition.
Abrupt transitions were intentional.
Thanks, I'll see what I can do about it later.
Just About To Write It Off...
Then it kicked in.
It does sound like the quasi-emo modern rock of Fall Out Boy, not that it's necessarily a bad thing. The drums keep it from feeling to melodramatic and it has a very hard feel to it, contrasting well with the tight, soft intro.
sweet man, thanks for your input
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